On Fri, 23 Sep 2005 08:02:42 GMT, "Simon"
Sorry Simon but you've failed the task. You should have put a comma after 'Ok' not a full stop. You then compounded your error by incorrectly starting your 2nd sentence with a capital letter when clearly the letter 't' should have been lower case following a comma.
Your layout also left a lot to be desired. It's good practice to leave two spaces after a full stop and one space after a comma. You left only one space after your full stop, which if you'd punctuated correctly would have been correct, however as you used a full stop instead of a comma you should then have left two spaces before commencing your new (incorrect) sentence of 'There you go'.
Transfer boost for BenitezNewspaper reports today claim that Liverpool will hand manager Rafael Benitez at least £15million to spend on transfers in January in an attempt to keep him happy. Reds duo Rick Parry...
So there you go Simon, and do please chalk it up!
Bernie The Bolt - 'In those days players weren't as highly paid as now, so most of us had part time jobs. Jimmy Case was a bouncer at the She Club, Tommy Smith used to open supermarkets as a Charles Bronson look-alike and Everton's Alan Ball and I were the voices of Pinky & Perky on TV.'
